Sunday, May 31, 2009

Sweet Revenge

Behind the glass your scarlet lips
Twisted into a smile,

Satisfied you'd executed the deed
With such flamboyance and style.

Crystal raised, you made a toast
And savoured the contents like wine.

The taste of cherry syrupy blood...
Tell me, was it saccharine?

4 comments:

  1. Heck, if that's your blood you are talking of, isn't is supposed to be blue?

    And don't worry, you are hardly the sugary sweet type so I am sure it didn't taste saccharine.

    Bet the vampire in question is still gagging :P

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  2. My blood is sparkly emerald green.

    Tastes like Haliborange.

    But...the poem isn't about a Vampire... It's about someone taking his revenge =S

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  3. Heck, Just came back and checked your response after all this time :)

    I know the poem is about an er 'revenger' - that's just analogspeak or whatever you like to call it :P

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  4. It's a he? I thought it was a she.
    Very well written tho :)

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