Raw, open and bare,
Now the world sees you for who you really are.
Writhing in mortification with each else stare,
You cry for help but all you get is despair.
You've wandered fortuitously into Lucifer's lair...
Dark thoughts begin to imbue your once pure mind,
To all your virtues and morals you are now blind.
The fake smiles and facade, you try to hide behind,
Are transparent and for that you are bitterly maligned.
Welcome, to the self induced purgatory of mankind.
Now the world sees you for who you really are.
Writhing in mortification with each else stare,
You cry for help but all you get is despair.
You've wandered fortuitously into Lucifer's lair...
Dark thoughts begin to imbue your once pure mind,
To all your virtues and morals you are now blind.
The fake smiles and facade, you try to hide behind,
Are transparent and for that you are bitterly maligned.
Welcome, to the self induced purgatory of mankind.
Good stuff, man.
ReplyDeleteThumbs up!
Awwwwwww Thank you!!! =D
ReplyDeleteawesome ! Put up what you read at Open Mic too. oh and next time do slow down :)
ReplyDeletehey great stuff. keep em comin!
ReplyDelete@ MC- Thanks =D
ReplyDeleteHehe yeah... will put it up next =)
Next time? I don't think there'll be a next time =P
@ The Whack- Thanks... means a lot coming from the "Rudyard Kipling" of Kottu *snigger* =P
Hey . . .
ReplyDeleteI likes it mucho :)
HUGS
Thanks Celestial
ReplyDeleteGlad you like it =)
Liking the new sub blog layout. The poem is awesome by the way!
ReplyDelete@ Scrumpulicious- Thanks! =D
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