tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post1754116105329302726..comments2023-10-24T16:19:27.526+05:30Comments on Dark Side of the Moon: TrappedUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-31412662660894702692009-09-12T22:42:02.217+05:302009-09-12T22:42:02.217+05:30That's an interesting way going about it! Migh...That's an interesting way going about it! Might actually try it out =)Deliriumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05870969356801179269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-87074119899887896462009-07-26T23:15:33.241+05:302009-07-26T23:15:33.241+05:30Delirium I feel this is pretty ok though.
In anci...Delirium I feel this is pretty ok though. <br />In ancient warfare, they say if you wanna retreat don’t feel beaten. Just put the target that you wanna reach to your rear and follow it. It is not a defeat but just a change of your aim towards your goal. ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-21353359193182153652009-06-18T00:06:18.499+05:302009-06-18T00:06:18.499+05:30The Whack- Sometimes there is no solution, and the...The Whack- Sometimes there is no solution, and the only way to achieve some peace of mind is to run away.Deliriumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05870969356801179269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-19730061074566419902009-06-17T11:41:53.613+05:302009-06-17T11:41:53.613+05:30lol i don't know about points to poetry, but r...lol i don't know about points to poetry, but running away a solution? nah that just makes you weaker don't you think? but depending on the situation yeah i guess running away or aoidance can mean victory i guess..TheWhacksteRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16163713209619543202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-24088723482731272572009-06-17T02:58:59.893+05:302009-06-17T02:58:59.893+05:30Not all poems are about a cause and solution.
This...Not all poems are about a cause and solution.<br />This one is simply the gradual stages of a state of mind. <br /><br />Take poems such as Daffodils by Wordsworth or A Thing of Beauty by Keats, they're descriptive poems. <br /><br />Poems don't necessarily need to have a point A and B.Deliriumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05870969356801179269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-58504278552384561142009-06-17T02:23:53.893+05:302009-06-17T02:23:53.893+05:30er, I wasn't aware you considered me retarded,...er, I wasn't aware you considered me retarded, but just to let you know, I got that.<br />that wasn't my point, it makes sense, it communicates the point, the rhyme and flow is good, but in the end the poem doesn't achieve anything.<br />the realization means nothing because all you've done is whine about it throughout the poem and then just go, this is what I should do, and then you just end it without doing anything.<br />it doesn't take you from point A to point B, it's just like, I'm here and I could get there if I did this, but meh, I'll save that for the next poem.St. Fallenhttp://www.saintfallen.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-10642083514818220702009-06-17T02:12:00.776+05:302009-06-17T02:12:00.776+05:30K, well let me break it down for you...
If you sti...K, well let me break it down for you...<br />If you still don't get it *shrug* =P<br /><br />It's a process...<br />Of something happening. <br />People tell you stuff or you think too much about it. <br />You start to hear voices in your head. <br />They hound you every minute of the day and become stronger. <br />Eventually you get REALLY confused 'cause they contradict each other. <br />At that point you all you want is to stifle the voices, 'cause they're getting ruddy bleeding tiresome- ENDLESSLY clamouring in your head!<br />And then realization dawns. The solution lies at the root of the matter. In order to get the voices to cease you've got to de-weed the thing from its roots...Deliriumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05870969356801179269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-72089072171250327622009-06-17T00:57:22.784+05:302009-06-17T00:57:22.784+05:30har di fucking har
yeah most of what's on kott...har di fucking har<br />yeah most of what's on kottu is shit<br />but there are a few poems here and there that are good<br />my point is that the poem doesn't "go" anywhere<br />if it did, I'd like it<br />but since it doesn't, it doesn't really help<br />it's just insight, and nothing elseSt. Fallenhttp://www.saintfallen.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-69912240002318860852009-06-16T23:13:42.331+05:302009-06-16T23:13:42.331+05:30@ St Fallen- From what I've found floating aro...@ St Fallen- From what I've found floating around Kottu I'd say it's far better.<br />It could be that you don't get it 'cause you can't relate to it or you don't know what some of those words mean.<br /><br />@ The Whack- Running away could be a solution...Deliriumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05870969356801179269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-63612033738268304272009-06-16T15:43:03.921+05:302009-06-16T15:43:03.921+05:30aww c'mon fallen i think its pretty good, note...aww c'mon fallen i think its pretty good, note on the monsters though, there's no use runnig away, turning around and facing them may as a metter of fact help more.TheWhacksteRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16163713209619543202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-14667540144894376922009-06-16T03:24:39.357+05:302009-06-16T03:24:39.357+05:30no offence, but this kinda sucks.
the rhyming is a...no offence, but this kinda sucks.<br />the rhyming is all good, but nothing really comes out of it... it's just... words :SSt. Fallenhttp://www.saintfallen.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-64728311617358197352009-06-16T00:19:02.787+05:302009-06-16T00:19:02.787+05:30Thanks man... Poetry is something I'm not too ...Thanks man... Poetry is something I'm not too sure of... So I don't know if I can actually write poems, so thanks =)<br /><br />That's some incentive to keep at it!<br /><br />And hey, you should give it a try, you might surprise yourself!Deliriumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05870969356801179269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035068520370020653.post-62877165965694626092009-06-15T11:09:40.498+05:302009-06-15T11:09:40.498+05:30Wow, great poetry - you've got a beautiful sen...Wow, great poetry - you've got a beautiful sense of flow and rhythm. <br /><br />And I could so identify with the words, I know all about the feeling of having demons within my head :)<br /><br />Wish I could write like this though :(Tulienoreply@blogger.com